Greeks and Persians, a rewrite.

This is a rewrite of a paper I wrote for a Junior College History class. I thought it was different, but when I went back to read it, I found the spelling and what no to be atrocious, so I'm endeavouring to clean it up:)

Over the course of Western Civilization, and history in general, there are a few defining moments that genuinely affect our subsequent history and send as many ripples through history as the clash between the Greeks and the Persians in the 5th Century BC.

Greece, and Athens in particular, are for lack of a better term,”The Wellspring of Western Civilization”. It may also be said that these roots go even deeper, for the peoples of the Mesopotamian region also greatly influenced both the Greeks, and Western Civilization as a whole.

The people known as the Greeks were the cultural recipients of the first, the Minoans, and later the Mycenaens. The geographic nature of Greece led to the establishment of small city-states, which while somewhat culturally homogenous, also showed a marked streak of individualism.

The Persians were most likely, originally, peoples of the steppes, who absorbed the cultures of Mesopotamia Assyria, and Babylon, who had all established sizable Empires. The Persians would improve on this under Cyrus the Great, and establish an enormous Empire in the East.

The Persian-Greek Wars lead not only to the Spread of Hellenism under Alexander, but also to the diffusion of Eastern ideas as well, their organizational skills, and Zoroastrianism would profoundly affect the West.


It is the year 775 BC, Athens and the other Greek City-states are beginning to recover from a period of economic hardship, and decline. The Greeks begin to send out colonies to ease the pressure of excess population, political dissatisfaction, and acquire access to foodstuffs for its rapidly expanding cities.
Their adoption of the alphabet and the working of iron helped bring them up to speed with the rest of the known world. Their skill as sailors made them master traders, who would soon come into conflict with the Phoenicians.
The Greeks were quite content to spread throughout the western Mediterranean, and found not just trading posts, but colonies. From the shores of the Black Sea, up the Danube and Volga Rivers to the Straits of Gibraltar and Northern Africa, the Greeks began to slowly dominate the seas.
Not content with their colonies in Ionia, and elsewhere, . They also began to covet the rich resources of Anatolia,they slowly worked their way inland and along the coast. Strangely enough, few of the kingdoms in the area required all out war to subdue them.

The recent adoption of democracy, introduced by Cleisthenes, by Athens and other Greek cities beginning in 505 BC, and their commercial success made the prospect of joining their newly formed, “Delian League”, very inviting.
The fact that a powerful empire was being built up by the Persians, made it quite logical. It was in this way that between 501 BC and 483 BC, Phrygia, Mysia, Lydia, Caria, and Lycia came into the Greek fold. Fortunately for the Greeks and the Anatolians, Cyrus found himself immersed in a struggle with the people to his east. He would eventually establish himself all the way to the Indus River and Afghanistan. They would also occupy the areas of Anatolia not under Greek control.

The adoption of a coinage system like that of Lydia, made the Greek economy even more vigorous, and in the Early 5th century BC, Athens began to dominate the “Delian League”. This brought about the mistrust of Sparta, a powerful militaristic city-state which had held on to its monarchial form of government.
 
In 481 BC the Spartans demanded that the Athenians disband the league, but Athens refused. She was arguably the lord of the seas now, and beginning to feel her power.

When the Spartans sent out a punitive expedition of 3,000 soldiers the next year. The Athenians didn’t meet them cowering behind their walls, but fielding an army of over 6,000 Athenian soldiers, most in Phalanx formation.

The Spartan General Pausanias, arrogantly demanded that they throw open their gates. The Athenians did, and out came marching 9,500 auxiliaries supplied by the “Delian League. This changed things drastically.
The “Battle of Athens”, was a short but terrible affair. The Spartans slew a young messenger who was sent to offer the terms, Pausanias the Spartan General sent a message the Athenians, " You will accept Spartas rule or face the consequeces". The Athenenians offered these terms, " You Spartans may return to your homes in two ways, one is to acknowledge Athenian Hegemony in matters on the Sea, and of Foreign Policy. If you do, you may walk home, if you don’t, you will all return on your shields”.

The Spartan response was sad, but typical of the Spartans. Pausanias read out the message, the Spartans were incensed, the order to charge the Athenians came soon after, but the Athenians on the wings were ordered to stand their ground at all costs, while the center slowly gave way. The Spartans read this as weakness, and their discipline broke down. The Athenian auxiliaries, completed the encircling, and the Spartans were slain to the last man.
This wouldn’t break the Spartans, but at the same time, Athens had hedged her bets. At almost the same time, Sparta was wracked by a slave revolt, the Helots had been incited to rise up. Athens immediately repeated thier ultimatum, ”If Sparta will recognize the Hegemony of Athens in Greece and in matters of “Greek Foreign Policy”, “Sparta may run its own affairs how it chooses”.

The Spartans had no choice but to agree, the deaths of 3,000 of their best soldiers, and the ongoing slave revolt forced them to concede their dominance.

This was a watershed for Athens, in the latter half of the 4th century BC, it became a true power, not just economically, but in the arts as well. Athens became a light that drew in the most talented peoples of not just Greece, but of the known world. The tragedies of Sophocles, Aeschylus, and Euripides, historians like Herodutus, “The Father of History”, and Thucydides, and of course Socrates, one of Western Civilizations great icons. Pericles would say, ”Athens is the School of Greece”*

While Tyre, the founder of Carthage, was under the thumb of the Persians, Carthage had been building a trading empire of its own. This was beginning to rub the peoples of Italy the wrong way.

In 414 BC, the colony of Syracuse came into came into conflict with the Carthaginians. Selinus, a colony friendly with Sparta, was conquered by the Carthaginians. The Spartans demanded satisfaction, while the Athenians preferred patience. It took the Spartans 5 months to reach Syracuse, and than they had to wait for their men to recover from the sea- sickness, but they promptly set out in 415 BC, to teach these Carthaginians a lesson. When they arrived in Selinus, the Athenian banner already flew there, Nicias, a prominent politician and military man had withstood a challenge from a scoundrel named Alcibiades, and ended Carthaginian influence in Sicily.
Athens needed no more assistance in solving Greek foreign policy. This was the final end of Spartan influence, in foreign affairs.
 
For the next sixty years, Athens enjoyed a period of peace, She was on good terms with the Persians, Egyptians, and the Latin’s of Italy, who had thrown off the yoke of their kings, and were beginning to soak up Greek culture like a sponge. Egypt in particular tied itself closely to Greece, in order to gain a counter-weight to the Persians.

These contacts also ended up reshaping Greek politics, culture, and especially religion. Persian Zoroastrianism, Egyptian thoughts on an afterlife, and the One god of the Hebrews began to permeate the theology of the Greeks.

Corinth and Thebes were also becoming very powerful now also, and the Athenians realized that the organization of their growing Empire, must share power with the other Greeks.

The return of Philip of Macedon in 338 BC, from an exchange of Ambassadors with the Persian Empire, and his tales of the greatness of the Persian army, the roads, and the organization, jolted the Athenians. He explained,”That the Empire is separated into separate parts, but each area has a governor in charge of his own Satrapy. While it is a monarchy, there is much we could learn from their organizational skills”. He also outlined a plan for a new form of government called a “Republic”, Whereby every Deme, or Greek state, would send a representative to Athens, where they would jointly conduct the affairs of the Greek Republic. The Greek Council, of 7 seats, was chosen by the representatives of the individual Demes from amongst themselves, , with Athens, Corinth, and Thebes all holding permanent seats, and the power of veto.

In 330 BC, Egypt was attacked by the Libyans, this gave Greece the excuse to formally enter North Africa. They were there to assist their “Friends”, but in reality they were there as a demonstration of Greek power. When Philip discovers that the Carthaginians are supporting the Libyans, he knows that this the time to deal with them once and for all. With his adopted son, Ptolemy, he immediately advances on the Carthaginians but cannot overpower them. Phillips hopes of making the Meditteranean a Greek lake, will never be realised. He did, however sign, the,” Treaty of Cyrene”, which split the Meditteranean into spheres of influence. West of Italy and Sicily to Carthage, East to Greece. Both nations would have equal trading rights, and jointly control piracy
 
My thought was that the Persians and Greeks settle on spheres of influence, for lack of a better term. Rather than rush into the East, they stick to what they know, and try to consolidate thier hold on the Eastern Med.

I will grant that when I wrote this, I was barely exposed to this genre, but I can't help but wonder what might have happened had Greece been a bit more patient. With an earlier settlement of the issues with Sparta, they had the type of government that might've allowed for coexistance with Carthage, or at least mutual respect, with free trade.

Rather than dominating far flung dominions that would be hard to keep in the fold, why not just reap the taxes and wealth from trading the things that thier citizens craved?

Just a thought.... I also like the entry to Africa earlier, as I think it would benefit Greece and Egypt as a whole.
 
This is cool.Ive always wanted a Athenian defeat of Sparta,and unification of Greece.Then a patient Greece that carefully establishishes Hellenic city-states in the eastern Mediteraeanean,and lasts a long time.You read my mind.
 
In 328 BC, with the Carthage issue settled, Philip returned to Macedonia, leaving his adopted son Ptolemy in Egypt to pursue an interest with one of the Pharaohs daughters. Over the next 15 years he would drive, “The Hellene Republics”, borders to the Danube River, His adopted son, Ptolemy, would father an Egyptian Dynasty. Peace between these nations, would serve Greece well in the future.

Once the border had been stabilized in the north, the Greeks began to explore ever more widely, especially in the Indian Ocean and the lands north of the Black Sea. In the year 241 BC, the first Greek trading fleet landed in the Mauryan Empire. They were treated grandly by the Emperor Asoka, and the traders there. A plethora of goods was available there, silks and tea from China, spices from Java, the incense of Arabia, and a multitude of other products.

At the same time many Mediterranean goods were in high demand in the East, the purple cloth of Tyre, jewelry from Egypt, and wine and Olive oil from Greece were becoming much sought after luxuries to the people of Asia. Greece intended to supply these goods, with no room for competition.

It was around this time that the Romans began to expand into Gaul, they wisely left the Greek cities there alone. Their attempts to enter Spain were thwarted by a large army equipped with war Elephants. When a Roman colonization party set out East from Aquileia, in northwest Italy, they were met by a column of Greek soldiers, whose commander, Antigonus, bluntly told them, “ You Romans have seen your limits in the East. These are Greek lands, and always will be”. For the next 150 years or so, the Romans would solidify their gains in Gaul.
 
Top